Analysis of My cares that was crushed
I let you appear in the front page of my life.
I choose never to let you go,
Even if you never withhold me with dignity.
I shiver countless nights.
With my spine almost out of me,
With words you said almost without your heart.
I got a stab from you a thousand times a heart beat.
Tears draining from eyes,
Enough to fill the might oceans.
You created a wrong impression of me,
With beings who never existed within my circle.
You let my cares waste,
Into the thin air.
I hope for a thousand nights and days,
to occur,
Where I can pour my cares,
Into the bowl of your soul.
Scheme | XXA XAX XXX AXXX XXXX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111010011111 11101111 1011100111100 110101 1111111 111110111 1101110101011 11011 01110110 10100101011 11011001001110 11111 01011 111010101 101 111111 0101111 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 577 |
Words | 133 |
Sentences | 9 |
Stanzas | 5 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 3, 3, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 17 |
Letters per line (avg) | 26 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 88 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 23 |
About this poem
About pains felt when you really care about someone and they never feel the same way
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Written on March 08, 2022
Submitted by anitalamptey32 on March 07, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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