Analysis of Coffee Conversations



our early morning coffee conversations
evoke wistfulness of your watercolor memories
so much so
that I sometimes desire to ink out the dark contours of my recollections
in order to share in yours

through a welcome act of self-deception
I am
through you

harvesting vegetables from my mother’s garden
gigging frogs with my brother after midnight
hiking steep mountains to sleep in bear cages
snorkeling in Kingston through reefs of deep purple
teaching English to curious adults in Hiroshima

what can you possibly glean
from my striking exhibitions of unlikeness?
what is there in me to share
to take you to like places?


Scheme AXXAX BXX BXXXX XAXX
Poetic Form
Metre 10101010010 0110011100100 111 110101011101111010 0101101 1010111010 11 11 100100111010 1011110101 10110110110 10010111110 10101100010010 1111001 111001011 1110111 1111110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 623
Words 107
Sentences 2
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 3, 5, 4
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 128
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Submitted on March 12, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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