Analysis of Stafford Park



Dahlia’s flood the borders edge
bursting shape into life
confetti colours of fragmented rainbows
their heavy leaf contained only
by the crewcut grass verge of old.

Rain patters a shimmering on the tarmac
snaked path following the autumn fauna
cast aside by the copper riverbank
trickle down to the wrought iron bandstand
where horn and drum once played.

I stop and pause…

Smatters of rain pat my ochre mac
whilst soft pain grimaces upon my face.

I see ghosts here...

an old lady throwing corn to the ducks
a young boy crying next to his buckled bike
as a vagabond coils a bench beneath the shelter;
cold and alone aside the traffics megaphone.

Yet tranquillity rest its heavy burden
lingering like fog over the bowling green
the geese laden pond and the evergreens
and thereon.

You can see it on their wrinkled faces
the folk who no longer work the factories
a certain freedom fits like a comfort blanket
and me - I’m just an infrequent visitor
who everyone smiles at!


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Poetic Form
Metre 110101 101011 010111001 11010110 1011111 110100101 1110001010 101101010 101101101 110111 1101 11111101 1111000111 1111 1110101101 01110111101 1010010101010 1001010110 11111010 10011100101 011010010 001 1111111010 01111010100 010101101010 01111010100 11011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 982
Words 186
Sentences 7
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 1, 2, 1, 4, 4, 5
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 98
Words per stanza (avg) 21

About this poem

An observational poem written in the early autumn of 2021

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Written on October 15, 2021

Submitted by m.green1000 on February 13, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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