Analysis of The Well



Hard ground at the bottom
Bottom of a well of pain
Everyone always asking me
How do I keep sane

I breathe one breath at a time
Take one step after another
Focus on my babies
Less on how they were robbed of their brother

I see his smile and hear his giggles
Live for hours in happy moments and days
Sometimes waking from a nightmare
Trying to find my way through this life maze

Hard ground at the bottom
Bottom of a well of pain
Tired of attempted climbing
Resulting in dried tears and blood stain


Scheme ABxb xcxc xdxd ABxb
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 111010 1010111 101101 11111 1111101 11110010 101110 1111011110 111101110 11100101001 0110101 1011111111 111010 1010111 10101010 010011011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 500
Words 100
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 100
Words per stanza (avg) 24

About this poem

I am a mother of 5 children. I lost 3 and still have 2 earthside. My 3rd Angel was a TRUE Angel at 5 months and passed away from SIDS. As a grieving parent this is how I feel.

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Written on November 29, 2021

Submitted by ashleyj.14003 on November 29, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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