Analysis of ONE MORE TIME
She took her child and ran into the night,
I searched for them they were nowhere in sight.
My world shattered I don’t know what to do,
I’m not missing just one, but there is two.
I have spent ten years taking care of the child,
Cast out of his life I was Exiled.
I miss his laughter, his voice and the looks on his face,
With the two of them gone I feel so out of place.
Getting over her was not easy it was tough,
He was a blessing a Diamond in the rough.
It’s been over a year, and they tell me he is tall,
My hands are tied my backs against the wall.
I thought I would see him grow up become an adult,
A fine young man my input a direct result.
I love him as if he were mine,
I would give my life to see him just ONE MORE TIME….
TURBO1904 NOV. 2021
Scheme | AA BB CC DD EE FF GG XX X |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1101010101 111110101 1110111111 1110111111 11111101101 11111111 1111011001111 101111111111 101001110111 11010010001 1110010111111 1111110101 1111111101101 01111100101 11111101 111111111111 101 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 815 |
Words | 160 |
Sentences | 10 |
Stanzas | 9 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1 |
Lines Amount | 17 |
Letters per line (avg) | 33 |
Words per line (avg) | 10 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 63 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 18 |
About this poem
It is about a love gone south and the child she left with that day. I'm still lost and I know that I grieved for him more then my wife.
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Written on October 10, 2021
Submitted by Turbo1904 on November 04, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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