Analysis of Our Lives

Ella Wheeler Wilcox 1855 (Janesville) – 1919



Our lives are songs. God writes the words,
And we set them to music at pleasure;
And the song grows glad, or sweet, or sad,
As we choose to fashion the measure.

We must write the music, whatever the song,
Whatever its rhyme, or metre;
And if it is sad, we can make it glad,
Or if sweet, we can make it sweeter.

One has a song that is free and strong;
But the music he writes is minor;
And the sad, sad strain is replete with pain,
And the singer becomes a repiner.

And he thinks God gave him a dirge-like lay,
Nor knows that the words are cheery;
And the song seems lonely and solemn-only
Because the music is dreary.

And the song of another has through the words
An under current of sadness;
But he sets it to music of ringing chords,
And makes it a pean of gladness.

So whether our songs are sad or not,
We can give the world more pleasure,
And better ourselves, by setting the words
To a glad, triumphant measure.


Scheme ABCB DBCB DBXB XEEE AXXA XBAB
Poetic Form Quatrain  (67%)
Metre 101111101 0111110110 001111111 111110010 1110101001 1011110 0111111111 111111110 110111101 101011110 0011110111 00100101 0111110111 11101110 00111001010 01010110 00110101101 11010110 11111101101 0110111 1101011111 11101110 01000111001 10101010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 905
Words 182
Sentences 8
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 118
Words per stanza (avg) 30
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 11, 2023

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Ella Wheeler Wilcox

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