Analysis of In France I Saw A Hill

Ella Wheeler Wilcox 1855 (Janesville) – 1919



In France I saw a hill-a gentle slope
Rising above old tombs to greet the gleam
From soft spring skies. Beyond these skies dwells hope,
But those green graves bespeak a broken dream.

There was a row of narrow beds, new-made;
Each bore a starry banner and a cross.
And each the name of one who, ere he played
His rôle of warrior, met earth's final loss.

They were so young, so eager for the fray!
And thoughts of glory filled each boyish heart,
When over dangerous seas they sailed away
To face the foe and play some splendid part.

But in the tedious toil, the dull routine
Which must precede achievement on the field,
Disease, that secret enemy with mean
Sly tactics, forced them to disarm and yield.

So they were buried on that hill in France,
Before their ears had heard the battle din;
Before life gave them its dramatic chance-
A lasting fame, or glorious death to win.

Yet, looking up beyond their graves of green,
I seem to see them wearing band and star;
Men are rewarded in the Worlds Unseen
Not for the way they die, but what they are.


Scheme ABAB CDCD EFEF GHGH IJIJ GKGK
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 0111010101 1001111101 1111011111 1111010101 1101110111 1101010001 0101111111 110110011101 1011110101 0111011101 11010011101 1101011101 10010010101 1101010101 0111010011 1101110101 1101011101 0111110101 0111110101 01011100111 1101011111 1111110101 1101000101 1101111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,030
Words 197
Sentences 10
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 136
Words per stanza (avg) 33
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ella Wheeler Wilcox

Ella Wheeler Wilcox was an American author and poet. more…

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