Analysis of Inescapable

Erick Arvizu 1980 (Williamsburg, VA)



Rounding a corner to find you
Exhaling as my heart sighs
Anyone outside of us could see
What I believe is my best disguise

Entranced in a swirl of words
Soft touches, smiles, and laughs
We pass the moments unacknowledged
Unaware we are two halves

It’s paining as we separate
Moving along through our day
Mini heart attacks when I see you
There’s so much we don’t say

The inescapable truth of it
We’re playing a game just to play
Our flirtatious banter and longing
We can’t win at the end of the day

Yet in the dark of night it finds me
Weighing heavy on my heart and mind
Do you feel the same as I do
Or are you ignorantly blind?


Scheme ABCB XXDX DDAE DEXD CDAD
Poetic Form Quatrain  (80%)
Etheree  (25%)
Metre 10010111 11111 10111111 110111101 0100111 110101 110101 011111 111110 10011101 101011111 111111 00100111 01001111 1001010010 111101101 100111111 101011101 11101111 11111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 631
Words 124
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 100
Words per stanza (avg) 25

About this poem

Two people flirting not wanting to admit their feelings perhaps.

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Written on July 16, 2021

Submitted by thepumpkinklng on July 16, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Erick Arvizu

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