I liked her



I liked her

With “yes” and “no” discussion
 There prevailed total confusion
 She will ask me for more assurance
 As if limited stock was to be sold out at once

 It used to be sweet tussle
 Even for sharing fruit like apple
 Some times for cold drink
 And sometimes for pen and ink

 But I liked her nature
 As I knew she was inclined for me and very sure
 She will never think of leaving me behind
 As her behavior proved to be very tough but kind

 She was with me by chance
 I had seen her only once
 She presented a friendly gesture
 That influenced me very much for her

 I considered myself lucky person on earth
 We pledged to remain together till the death
 Such was bond and slowly developing
 I was knee deep in love and eloping

 She will come from behind and put hands
 On my eyes and ask “ foes or friends”
 She will not utter a single word
 Only I has to judge it by any standard

 She is like garden flower
 Such luck may be with only few
 I knew that one day she will be mine
 She held all the qualities and stood best among feminine

 As luck would have it
 She was tall in stature
I looked small with her height
The difference could be seen in day light
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Submitted on May 28, 2013

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Scheme A BBCC DDEE AXFF XCAA XXXE XXGG AXXB XAHH
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,144
Words 228
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Hasmukh Mehta

am an ex-serviceman from Indian Air force. I joined Oriental Insurance Company and retired from there too in May, 2007. I have been graduated from Punjab University. I hold technical qualification like Diploma in Radio/engineering .I have done English and Hindi stenography as well. I had mastered the art in Morse telephony too. I am associated with several welfare organizations and served long time as Union leader too. I am at present working as hobby writer. I write poems on various subjects and invite suggestions from all the quarters. I have written one memoir named “As I see it” and ready for publication. One interesting part of writing I would love to share with all my reader friends. I am not sure weather it may be the same case with all as I do not want to be caught in any controversy. When I sit on my personal computer, there is absolutely no thought in mind as to what is to be picked up as thought and written. These all things I leave it to the discretion of almighty to fill my mind with relevant ideas. So far I have been graced by Him and as result able to compose about 4000 poems. I have be awarded with 4 achievement award from the www.ezinearticles.com for successfully meeting with their standard. I am writing on many sites so as to be associated with reader friends all over the world. I am thankful to all those who have supported me in my initial days. more…

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