Analysis of I liked her



I liked her

With “yes” and “no” discussion
 There prevailed total confusion
 She will ask me for more assurance
 As if limited stock was to be sold out at once

It used to be sweet tussle
 Even for sharing fruit like apple
 Some times for cold drink
 And sometimes for pen and ink

But I liked her nature
 As I knew she was inclined for me and very sure
 She will never think of leaving me behind
 As her behavior proved to be very tough but kind

She was with me by chance
 I had seen her only once
 She presented a friendly gesture
 That influenced me very much for her

I considered myself lucky person on earth
 We pledged to remain together till the death
 Such was bond and slowly developing
 I was knee deep in love and eloping

She will come from behind and put hands
 On my eyes and ask “ foes or friends”
 She will not utter a single word
 Only I has to judge it by any standard

She is like garden flower
 Such luck may be with only few
 I knew that one day she will be mine
 She held all the qualities and stood best among feminine

As luck would have it
 She was tall in stature
I looked small with her height
The difference could be seen in day light


Scheme A BBCC DDEE AXFF XCAA XXXE XXGG AXXB XAHH
Poetic Form
Metre 110 1101010 10110010 111111010 1110011111111 1111110 101101110 11111 0011101 111010 1111101110101 11101110101 1001011110111 111111 1110101 101001010 1100110110 10101101011 11101010101 1110100100 11110101 111101011 11101111 111100101 101111111010 1111010 11111101 111111111 111010001101100 11111 111010 111101 0100111011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,144
Words 228
Sentences 1
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 100
Words per stanza (avg) 25
Font size:
 

Submitted on May 28, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:08 min read
2

Hasmukh Mehta

am an ex-serviceman from Indian Air force. I joined Oriental Insurance Company and retired from there too in May, 2007. I have been graduated from Punjab University. I hold technical qualification like Diploma in Radio/engineering .I have done English and Hindi stenography as well. I had mastered the art in Morse telephony too. I am associated with several welfare organizations and served long time as Union leader too. I am at present working as hobby writer. I write poems on various subjects and invite suggestions from all the quarters. I have written one memoir named “As I see it” and ready for publication. One interesting part of writing I would love to share with all my reader friends. I am not sure weather it may be the same case with all as I do not want to be caught in any controversy. When I sit on my personal computer, there is absolutely no thought in mind as to what is to be picked up as thought and written. These all things I leave it to the discretion of almighty to fill my mind with relevant ideas. So far I have been graced by Him and as result able to compose about 4000 poems. I have be awarded with 4 achievement award from the www.ezinearticles.com for successfully meeting with their standard. I am writing on many sites so as to be associated with reader friends all over the world. I am thankful to all those who have supported me in my initial days. more…

All Hasmukh Mehta poems | Hasmukh Mehta Books

0 fans

Discuss this Hasmukh Mehta poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "I liked her" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 15 May 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/74310/i-liked-her>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    May 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    16
    days
    6
    hours
    22
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    A poem in which the first letters of each line spell a word is called _______.
    A a sestina
    B an ode
    C an acrostic
    D a haiku