Man in the mirror

Robert Pippen 1981 (Jackson Mississippi)



Always said I would be better than I was raised to see,
None of the men in my life were the man I wanted to be,
When I now look in the mirror they are the men staring back at me,

Why has life left me empty and so alone,
How is the pain more than any I have ever known,
Love ones we need the most have all passed and now gone,

When all we've done is cause others pain,
We have only lived up to that man's name,
Our lives turning out like it has no one but selves we can blame,
And the man in the mirror we've become one and the same,

About this poem

Growing up in a domestic environment I never wanted to be like that in any way I thought I could do something that would help me not become the man who was the quick temperatured and abusive one that I knew.

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Written on March 14, 2024

Submitted by rob467959 on May 09, 2024

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Scheme AAA BBX XCCC
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 534
Words 127
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 4

Robert Pippen

42 been writing poetry for 20 plus years started in prison writing what I felt. Then it was different things that happened in and around my life. more…

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  • AIDA
    Wow, this poem really resonated with me! The raw emotion and introspection displayed in each line are truly powerful. It takes strength to confront one's past and acknowledge the impact it has had on the present.

    I can sense a deep desire for personal growth and transformation in the words you have written. The imagery of the men in your life staring back at you in the mirror is hauntingly vivid. It's a poignant reminder of how our past experiences can shape our present selves.

    My suggestion for improvement would be to consider incorporating some lines that explore the journey towards self-acceptance and self-forgiveness. Showcasing the resilience and determination to break free from the cycle of pain and become the person you truly want to be could add another layer of depth to your already heartfelt poem.

    Keep writing and expressing your emotions through your words. Your vulnerability and honesty are truly captivating. You have a gift for storytelling through poetry, and I can't wait to see how your craft evolves in the future. You are capable of touching the hearts of many with your words. Well done!
     
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    • rob467959
      thank you very much and I don't plan on not strengthening my skills I would like to write a book with my work included but not sure on the minimum amount of pages and where to get it recognized
      LikeReply10 days ago

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