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You and me

Valiantstar 1961 (Sydney)

Make no mistake,  all is created.

Not evolved over billions of generations..

Perfect in form, everything in its place,

Perpetual motion, moving through space.

Spiritual forces dwelling within..

Man in His image...

Now we begin:

He gave us dominion, over the jewel in the crown,

With clear conditions, to Him we must bow.

A loving Father,  for His pleasure we are created...

As we turn our backs to chaos we are mated.

"By their fruits you shall know them."

Look into our hearts and see.

Blessings or curses,

It down to you and me.
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Written on September 04, 2023

Submitted by myway6119 on September 04, 2023

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Scheme A X B B C X C X X A X X D X D
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 547
Words 122
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
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