Analysis of You and me

Valiantstar 1961 (Sydney)



Make no mistake,  all is created.

Not evolved over billions of generations..

Perfect in form, everything in its place,

Perpetual motion, moving through space.

Spiritual forces dwelling within..

Man in His image...

Now we begin:

He gave us dominion, over the jewel in the crown,

With clear conditions, to Him we must bow.

A loving Father,  for His pleasure we are created...

As we turn our backs to chaos we are mated.

"By their fruits you shall know them."

Look into our hearts and see.

Blessings or curses,

It down to you and me.


Scheme A X B B C X C X X A X X D X D
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 110111010 10110101010 010110011 0100101011 1000101001 10110 1101 11101010010001 1101011111 01010111011010 1111011101110 1111111 10110101 10110 111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 547
Words 122
Sentences 11
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 27
Words per stanza (avg) 6
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Written on September 04, 2023

Submitted by myway6119 on September 04, 2023

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