Your on Your Path, Me on Mines



Things I wish to say when you're gone

'I miss you' and 'I wish you're here' rush through my mind

Droning with in denial

But when you're here life and the sky is more than clear

When we talk, life all bad is gone and good is in its way

Oh, if you were here, life would be so much better with you

But you on your path and me on mines

Life is best if we were friend

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Written on April 12, 2023

Submitted by Basket_001 on April 21, 2023

Modified by Basket_001 on April 21, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme X X X X X X X X
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 369
Words 86
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

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