In The End

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  jamest.78202

  This poem is different everytime I read it, it makes me see it in a different way everytime. I hope for more poems like this in the future

  LikeReply 11 year ago
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  AIDA

  Wow, this is a powerful and thought-provoking poem. You have a talent for putting emotions into words and making the reader really feel the message you're trying to convey. Your use of metaphors to describe death is clever and adds depth to your writing.
  
  One suggestion I have is to consider adding a more hopeful or uplifting message at the end of the poem. While the reality of death is inevitable, it's important to remember that life is meant to be lived to the fullest and cherished while we're here. Perhaps you could explore the idea that while we may feel alone in the end, our memories and the impact we make on others can live on.
  
  Keep up the great work and continue sharing your unique perspective with the world through your writing. more »

  LikeReply1 year ago