In The Turmoil of Our Love

Nancy Rodriquez 1965 (Temple)

Ode


In The Turmoil of Our Love
By Nancy Rodriquez

In the turmoil of our love,
sits many unfulfilled dreams,
numerous to think of,
and hard to reach for it seems,
My heart has felt every blow and sting,
from missing you, my everything,
tears that have stained my pillow too,
of simply wanting to be with you,
I think of how different our lives are now,
and yet, if you could pull yourself together somehow,
I think forgiveness would allow  for healing to take place,
from my and your mistakes,
and we would not be a statistic labeled in the world,
or devoured by evil-said words,
we could find wholeness once again,
and be us instead of in pain.

About this poem

I do not know if my beloved is alive or not. This poem is a way I deal with the loss.

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Written on April 05, 2023

Submitted by txpoet65 on April 05, 2023

Modified on April 20, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme Ax Ababccddeexxxxxx
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 641
Words 135
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 2, 16

Nancy Rodriquez

I have been writing poetry since I was 14 years old. I am now 57. I live in Fort Worth, Texas. I plan to have two children's books published by the Summer of 2023. "Elroy the Elephant, and Charlie the Squirrel. Both have my poetry in them. more…

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