A Lingering Hurt



A Lingering hurt
By Nancy Rodriquez

As drugs slowly take over your mind,
and darkness reaps the benefits of your soul,
within me, I find it harder to find,
you have been sinking to a new low,
One day you are happy and in control,
the next, you do not wish to bother,
A lingering hurt is then felt in my soul,
and fresh tears are falling one after another,
The heartbreak cries out for the pain to go,
and I am questioning if we knew love at all,
it is a hard pill to swallow,
and the next move is your call,
inside, I feel hallow,
You once were my Superman, who could never fall,
Our lives entwined no more, shattered in pieces.

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Written on March 03, 2023

Submitted by txpoet65 on March 04, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XX ABACBDBDCECECEX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 629
Words 139
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 2, 15

Nancy Rodriquez

I have been writing poetry since I was 14 years old. I am now 57. I live in Fort Worth, Texas. I plan to have two children's books published by the Summer of 2023. "Elroy the Elephant, and Charlie the Squirrel. Both have my poetry in them. more…

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