Communication Error



I brought up my biggest fear

It took all my courage to come out and say it.

And at first, I was met with warmth and love

And for a moment I felt comfort and I thought I was safe.

But that was just a communication error,

Because as I moved closer and tried to

Visualize our life together in a year

And he finally actually understood what I meant,

What I've been trying to say this whole while,

He screamed and shouted and stormed out,

confirming everything I was afraid of.
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Written on 2022

Submitted by on October 11, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

33 sec read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme A X B X X X A X X X B
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 486
Words 109
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

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