The awakened path

Adarsh. J 2000 (Kerala)



The great wall never shake,
but the shadow  of him stop,
for seeing his destiny

The devil never stop, a mess
but he also never stop by him
Thus the path go towards straight,
without knowing next stone step

The awaken wings of him emerge, and
lights his life path and cover him.
He never stop, He never stop

About this poem

This poem tell us the need to take a right path in life

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Written on August 09, 2022

Submitted by jadarsh031 on August 09, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAX XBXX XBA
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 308
Words 65
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 3

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