Analysis of The awakened path

Adarsh. J 2000 (Kerala)



The great wall never shake,
but the shadow  of him stop,
for seeing his destiny

The devil never stop, a mess
but he also never stop by him
Thus the path go towards straight,
without knowing next stone step

The awaken wings of him emerge, and
lights his life path and cover him.
He never stop, He never stop


Scheme XAX XBXX XBA
Poetic Form Etheree  (20%)
Metre 011101 101111 1101100 01010101 111010111 1011011 0110111 0010111010 11110101 11011101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 308
Words 65
Sentences 2
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 3
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 80
Words per stanza (avg) 20

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This poem tell us the need to take a right path in life

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Written on August 09, 2022

Submitted by jadarsh031 on August 09, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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