Analysis of Mine
I remember the day I met you on that summers day
On that sunny day on the 5th of May
As we sat along the beach
How I accidently punched you and you bruised like a peach
The day slowed down when ever you were around
I could talk to you sitting, standing and upside down!
I could talk to you for hours on end
But fate told me we must be friends
I really did Like you,
I really did
I hoped, I wished but non of them made the right dish
I couldnt lock you in my palms
I came to you with open arms
All i got was a disgusting look
Like I was some kind of animal or some crook
You ran away into the dark
But then you turned around, It must have been a spark
You told me you loved me
You told me you did
You gave me a hug and brushed back my hair
and placed a rose and it settled there
All of a sudden your soft tender lips touched mine
And everything froze including time
Thats when I realised that you were mine
Scheme | AABBCDEFGHIJKLLMMNHOOPQP |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 10100111111101 11101101111 1110101 11100011011101 01111101001 1111110100111 1111111011 11111111 110111 1101 111111111011 1111011 11111101 111100101 111111100111 11010101 111101111101 111111 11111 1110101111 010101101 110101110111 01010101 11111101 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 882 |
Words | 193 |
Sentences | 2 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 24 |
Lines Amount | 24 |
Letters per line (avg) | 30 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 708 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 193 |
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Submitted on July 25, 2017
Modified on March 05, 2023
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