Analysis of May I Have A Dance With You
May I have a dance with you? Where we will feel the actual love.
We spent our lifetime blaming each other's, of betraying our feelings.
Hold my hand, and let the rhymes step on our pure emotions for
Once, and with the music, let's just imagine if we are flying alike doves.
Close your gorgeous eyes, and recall the great moments we had,
Where you wink your eyes to me, and I innocently smile to your beauty.
Let's just dance quietly, we spoke so much of our yearnings and yet,
We lost the way to shut our words within a kiss that makes us happy.
You are younger, even if the night is young since he grew up with my
Thoughts drawing you on my fantasies, younger than my suffering life.
We choose wrong decisions sometimes, like the time when you had
To choose between my loving heart, and my thirsty flesh to forgive you.
Unfortunately, you choose my loving heart, and left my soul taking by
The death, therefore don't blame me of why our love didn't last for too long.
Remember, if someone asks you for a dance that I will be watching you,
Wondering if I wrote my life about you, or it was about the beautiful vase of flower.
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1110111111101001 111011011010101010 1110101111010101 1010101101011110011 1110101011011 111111101100011110 11110011111101001 110111101010111110 11101010111111111 11011110010111001 11101001101111 11011101011011011 010001111010111101 01111111101101111 01011111011111101 100111110111110101001110 |
Characters | 1,120 |
Words | 214 |
Sentences | 11 |
Stanzas | 16 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
Lines Amount | 16 |
Letters per line (avg) | 55 |
Words per line (avg) | 13 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 55 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 13 |
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Submitted on May 22, 2015
Modified on March 05, 2023
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