Analysis of May I Have A Dance With You



May I have a dance with you? Where we will feel the actual love.

We spent our lifetime blaming each other's, of betraying our feelings.

Hold my hand, and let the rhymes step on our pure emotions for

Once, and with the music, let's just imagine if we are flying alike doves.

Close your gorgeous eyes, and recall the great moments we had,

Where you wink your eyes to me, and I innocently smile to your beauty.

Let's just dance quietly, we spoke so much of our yearnings and yet,

We lost the way to shut our words within a kiss that makes us happy.

You are younger, even if the night is young since he grew up with my

Thoughts drawing you on my fantasies, younger than my suffering life.

We choose wrong decisions sometimes, like the time when you had

To choose between my loving heart, and my thirsty flesh to forgive you.

Unfortunately, you choose my loving heart, and left my soul taking by

The death, therefore don't blame me of why our love didn't last for too long.

Remember, if someone asks you for a dance that I will be watching you,

Wondering if I wrote my life about you, or it was about the beautiful vase of flower.


Scheme X X X X A B X B C X A D C X D X
Poetic Form
Metre 1110111111101001 111011011010101010 1110101111010101 1010101101011110011 1110101011011 111111101100011110 11110011111101001 110111101010111110 11101010111111111 11011110010111001 11101001101111 11011101011011011 010001111010111101 01111111101101111 01011111011111101 100111110111110101001110
Characters 1,120
Words 214
Sentences 11
Stanzas 16
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 55
Words per line (avg) 13
Letters per stanza (avg) 55
Words per stanza (avg) 13
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Submitted on May 22, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ahmad Al_khatat

I started writing poems since I was ten years old, Most of my poems are free verse or proses.Which talked about sad dark and wild romance .Even some ones talking politics.http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Prose_poetryhttp://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Free_verse ahmad4all_2@hotmail.comMontreal - Canada Thank you more…

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