Analysis of I Miss You

Imelia Jone Green 1964 (Tacoma, Washington)



When I don't hear your voice,
My day just doesn't seem right,
It has gotten to the point,
Where I can't even sleep at night.
I know that you think I'm playing,
But the time for games are through,
Noone can tell me how I feel,
When I am missing you.
Whenever I can't see your face,
In my heart there is an empty space,
You can believe me or not but yes it is true,
I long to see ya cause I am missing you.
If I don't hear your voice, I miss you,
Whenever I can't see your face, I miss you,
When will you understand,
I just miss you.


Scheme ABCBDEFEGGEEEEHE
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 1111011 1110101 11110111 11111110 1011111 1111111 111101 01011111 011111101 110111111111 11111111101 111111111 01011111111 11101 1111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 516
Words 112
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 395
Words per stanza (avg) 112
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Submitted on November 07, 2010

Modified on April 23, 2023

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