Analysis of Abyss Of This Hell
this past year, a full blown nightmare, unraveled before my eyes
i can't begin to fully explain my emotions
but it was a tornado of explosions in my mind
whisking me away from the daylight of reality
wishing i was drowning in the deep blue ocean
i witness the darkness of my fantasies just as an owl see's
flying further and further into the abyss of this hell
i'm afraid all of my demons have awoken
and all i'm reminded of is the ringing of sunday morning church bells
this anxiety that is rising inside of me is like a volcano
scorching all of my senses, and paranoia has left me all but broken
now i'm crippled with pain and live in shelters, lost and disabled
made a memory in a journal, of this shameful journey, it won't be forgotten anymore
i may be a bitter old man and i dont know where this road of mine is going
but i'm desperately hoping, i wont get to be that bad, when i'm just rotten to the core
Scheme | ABCDEAFEGHEIJKJ |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11101110100111 1101110011010 1110011010011 1101101110 101110001110 1100101110011111 101001001001111 1011111011 01101011010111011 1010011100111110010 101111000101111110 1110110101010010 10100001011101011101001 11101011011111111110 11100010111111111110101 |
Closest metre | Iambic octameter |
Characters | 897 |
Words | 177 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 15 |
Lines Amount | 15 |
Letters per line (avg) | 48 |
Words per line (avg) | 12 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 719 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 177 |
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Submitted on February 28, 2016
Modified on March 05, 2023
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