Analysis of When You Left



Last night I saw you again in my dream.
Came morning I woke then did I realize
Radiant and beautiful did you seem.
Oh how I wished to gaze into your eyes.

At once I remembered that you were gone
When you left me my heart just broke; did you hear?
I’m sleeping alone now; it seems so wrong
How I wish I could stop crying these tears.

I hate you for leaving me this way
Without you by my side I feel so blue
And yet my love for you won’t go away
Oh how I wish I could let go of you.

Your fragrant hair, your gentle, tender touch
Will live forever in my memory.
Am I selfish; am I asking too much?
How I wish your love would envelope me.

You’ve been gone now for a month and a week;
Lying alone nights I can only cry.
But sometimes your name I still dare to speak
Oh how I wish you didn’t have to die.


Scheme ABAB XXXX CDCD EFEF GHGH
Poetic Form Quatrain  (80%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1111101011 1101111110 1000100111 1111110111 1110101101 11111111111 1100111111 1111111011 111110111 0111111111 0111111101 1111111111 1101110101 1101001100 1110111011 111111101 1111101001 1001111101 1011111111 111111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 810
Words 183
Sentences 11
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 122
Words per stanza (avg) 34

About this poem

Admittedly not one of my best works. But, hey, maybe someday someone will turn it into a country song! It could happen!

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Written on 1995

Submitted by Nebula7693 on March 23, 2024

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