Analysis of The letter in your hands



The letter in your hands

With a piece of paper,
she left you alone,
snatched her hand
for someone unknown,

Now, you look at your hand and
wish for the warmth to come back,
you still read that one letter
with a stone in your neck,

But are you aware, that
somewhere distant a body lay,
wrapped in love,
writing you in pages every day,

She can't be HER,
she can't be anything grand,
she can just wish to be
the letter in your hands,

When the night comes,
she will sing for you,
to the birds, to the clouds,
to everyone in her view,

Next morning
she will ask for a cure,
for your broken heart darling,
for it to restore,

She'll let your praises
leak through her pen,

And every time you wish
for the slipping sand,
she'll wish to be
the letter in your hands.

- D's diary


Scheme A bcdc xxbx xexe bdfA xgxg hxhx xx xdfA f
Poetic Form
Metre 010011 101110 11101 101 1101 1111110 1101111 1111110 101011 111011 1100101 101 1010101001 1110 111101 111111 010011 1011 11111 101101 110001 110 111101 1110110 11101 11110 1101 0100111 10101 1111 010011 1100
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 783
Words 188
Sentences 2
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 2, 4, 1
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 59
Words per stanza (avg) 15

About this poem

This is a cliche love triangle, where a man is in love with a women who left him. There is one more women about whom the man has no idea, and she is utterly in love with that man. Her love is selfless and divine.

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Submitted by kitton_j on February 10, 2024

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