Analysis of No amount of sleep can fix it



No amount of sleep can fix it

I fight with my face
Trying to force my eyes open
And my chin up

No amount of sleep can fix it

I fight with my mind
Trying to keep myself present
And my head clear

No amount of sleep can fix it

I fight with my conscious
Trying to stay above the waves
Of overwhelming guilt

No amount of sleep can fix it

I fight with my guilt
Trying to appreciate all that makes life worth living
Without feeling like my existence is a stain on it

No amount of sleep can fix it

I fight with all of it
Trying to remember how to not be tired
Like remembering a song you forgot doesn't exist


Scheme A xxx A xxx A xxb A bxa A axx
Poetic Form Etheree  (25%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 10111111 11111 10111110 0111 10111111 11111 1011110 0111 10111111 111110 10110101 10101 10111111 11111 1010101111110 01101101010111 10111111 111111 101010111110 10100011011001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 610
Words 134
Sentences 1
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 1, 3, 1, 3, 1, 3, 1, 3, 1, 3
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 48
Words per stanza (avg) 12

About this poem

This is a poem I wrote while working the night shift. Its about the feelings I have when I find myself in silence, surround by nothing but my own thoughts.

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Written on February 06, 2024

Submitted by Milesmiller2014 on February 06, 2024

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