Analysis of Would you still love me?

A J C 1958 (Swansea, MA)



Would you still love me?

As I sit in the doctor's office, trembling in fear, he comes in and tells me I will be dead in a year. All your dreams will disappear, and I won't know your name or your brother's or mother's. Why do I have to endure all this pain? The rain is like teardrops falling from the sky. If I should die, will you still love me and know my name? Please say it. It will always be the same. If you go to heaven, will you still know my name? I want be in your dreams; that's the only place I want to be. Nothing else matters to me.


Scheme A A
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 11100101010001110011111100111110101111111101101111101111011111010111111111101111111111011111101111111110111010111111011011
Characters 547
Words 116
Sentences 11
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 1
Lines Amount 2
Letters per line (avg) 206
Words per line (avg) 57
Letters per stanza (avg) 206
Words per stanza (avg) 57

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This poems dedicated to the people with Alzheimer's that's one of my biggest fears.

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Written on January 26, 2024

Submitted by alanswansea18 on January 26, 2024

Modified by alanswansea18 on February 07, 2024

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