Analysis of Wanna See You Fail

Robert T. Davenport 1979 (Newark, New Jersey)



Wanna See You Fail
By Robert T. Davenport

In the shadows they lurk, with envy in their eyes,
Those who revel in your struggles, who long to see you cry.
They smile with deceit, their hearts filled with disdain,
For they find pleasure in your pain, in your moments of strain.

They cheer for your missteps, your every downfall,
Their satisfaction grows as you stumble and fall.
They whisper behind your back, spreading rumors and lies,
Their words like daggers, piercing through your disguise.

They envy your success, your dreams that take flight,
But instead of support, they choose to ignite,
The flames of jealousy, burning deep within,
Their bitterness consuming, a never-ending sin.

But let me tell you this, with utmost certainty,
Their desire to see you fail is nothing but a fallacy.
For you are strong, resilient, with a spirit that won't break,
Their negativity can't touch you, it's a futile mistake.

So rise above their hatred, their toxic desires,
Let their words fuel your fire, ignite your inner fires.
For in the end, it's their own failure they will face,
While you soar to new heights, leaving them in disgrace.

Remember, their darkness can't dim your light,
You are destined for greatness, shining ever so bright.
So let them watch, let them seethe in their envy,
For their desire to see you fail is nothing but empty.


Scheme XX AXBB CCAA DDEE FFGG HHII DDFF
Poetic Form
Metre 10111 110110 00111110011 11100110111111 11101111101 11110011011011 11110111001 10101111001 1100111101001 11110101101 11010111111 10110111101 01110010101 1100010010101 11111111100 1010111111010100 11110101010111 10100111101001 1101110110010 111101100111010 100111110111 111111101001 0101101111 1110110101011 11111110110 110101111110110
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,341
Words 259
Sentences 12
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 2, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 41
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 150
Words per stanza (avg) 33

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