Analysis of A Bad Day, A Good Night



A Bad Day, A Good Night

I’ve worked hard all day
Rough hands, tired feet
Answering the phone
Listening to upset voices
Constant stressful work issues.

Lunchtime is here
Didn’t eat breakfast, starved
Food comes, server plops it on the table
Don’t wanna go off on her
Like I did to someone the other day.

Home at last, slippers waiting for me
I can hear the sound of bath water running
Bubbles everywhere, soft music playing
I find you in bed looking like, Adonis
You beckon me to come to you, towel drops
My bad day turns into a good night.


Scheme A BXXXX XXXXB XCCXXA
Poetic Form
Metre 011011 11111 11101 10001 10010110 1010110 111 11101 1110111010 1101110 111110101 111101011 11101111010 101011010 11101101010 11011111101 111101011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 548
Words 106
Sentences 3
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 1, 5, 5, 6
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 106
Words per stanza (avg) 25

About this poem

Workers have hard days at work sometimes, but it always feels so good to come home and have a good night.

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Written on July 17, 2020

Submitted by Classact607 on December 18, 2023

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Eve Hall

She has written several poetry books. Her poetry has been published in the Chicken Soup Series and other publications. more…

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