Analysis of Your Own Spirit Within



As I looked into the Horizon I saw the Sun so bright,
Its Splendour arose on my gloomy face as I had taken a fright,
It was just after everything and everyone had gone back to their homes,
Was this going to be the new norm?

With tears running through my eyes Right down to my cheeks,
I realised it had been weeks Since Mom had left this earth.
Her passing left me in delusion
Even though it was never meant to be an illusion,
I had to walk forth into a new dawn
Daily I would yawn ,
they called it grief exhaustion, where was I going next?
My best friend had left me to face the world alone I had so many things to say
and yet I could do was pray,

Even though I could not see or touch,
I knew a new day had come my way
The Spirit held my hand Even in the worst of my state
I just knew somewhere, somehow
An unseen,unknown Angel was watching over me,
Some call The Spirit,
Yes I gladly followed For The journey had begun

Here we are saying
We hope You find Your Own Spirit that Holds Your hand
When You need them the most,
I am no longer alone
I have finally found where I belong.


Scheme AAXX XXBBCCXDD XDXXXXB XXXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 111010010110111 1101111011111001 1111010010111111 111011011 111011111111 111111111111 010110010 10111101111010 1111101011 10111 1111010111101 11111111010111110111 0111111 101111111 110111111 01011110001111 11111 1110110101 11010 1110101010101 11110 111111101111 111101 1111001 1110011101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,088
Words 239
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 9, 7, 5
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 210
Words per stanza (avg) 55

About this poem

Drawn from the pain of loosing a Beloved Best friend, who was my Mother, Giving out hope and love to all who have lost loved ones, that they is a silver lining on every dark cloud.

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Written on September 20, 2023

Submitted by faithm.28117 on September 20, 2023

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Faith Mvududu

A passionate, and loving introverted extrovert who desires to see others inspired, filled with hope to carry on and joy to be within despite the pains around their lives. more…

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