Analysis of OAK



Frost covered skeletal arms,

hang low in resignation.

Unforgiving brittle bones of

my grandmother’s formidable oak

allows for the dominance of the sun to 

steal its glory.

Barren from bended bondage

bare leaves summon other lives,

to reconstruct their birthing.

Dampened warmth lies beneath the 

mossy surface soil of intertwining tendrils  

as the oak roots breathe a history.

Sixty, of your seventy-foot frame shadows

secrets that hide the ghosts of summer

where dreams and dying linger on. Time can 

be still and thick and transparent in the dark,

to a majestic and ripe 

symbolic shapeshifter. the veins in your leaves 

give away your truth. 

suspended by the heavy acorns that nurture

as the branches in this southern quake

arc the ground with the weight of human limbs.

my mother remembers the murderous sight.

frozen now. wounded by the icy corset that grips,

your frame is vulnerable and unassuming.

under the deep lies the future. underneath the deep

the past is surrendered.

Root and vein and water and blood

combine to declare the oak, a glorious

Winter is the predator of the solstice

undermining the uncertainty of spring.


Scheme A X X X X B X X C X A B X D X X X X X D X X X X C X X X X X C
Poetic Form
Metre 1101001 110010 00101011 11010001 01101001011 1110 1011010 1110101 101110 1011010 110111001 101110100 1011100111 101101110 1101010111 11010010001 1001001 010101011 10111 010101010110 101001101 1011011101 11001001001 1011010101011 11110000010 100110100101 011010 10101001 10101010100 10101001010 1000010011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,194
Words 240
Sentences 16
Stanzas 31
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 30
Words per stanza (avg) 6

About this poem

I wrote this for my mother. Born in the south in 1930, her earliest memories are of the trees she once loved.

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Written on May 07, 2022

Submitted by poetiklysence on August 24, 2023

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Carol Covington

Carol Covington is an Army veteran, mother, grandmother and recent college graduate. She earned her B.A. in 2020 from Metropolitan State University of Denver, an IDP titled degree "Healing Trauma through Creative Self-Expression. Currently a guest poet with Art from Ashes, Carol hopes to complete her first poetry collection this year. more…

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