I Followed



I followed you to love unknown.

To be lost and found.

Through unlocked windows and open doors.

Detoured my future to fulfill yours.

I followed.

One step unearthing the next I kept 

a cadence of dissolving dissolution that broke

my pace.  I stumbled upon mounds of 

Sepia saturated skin warmed my toes

In between your last lovers mistakes. 

Blameless in my need to heal you and whole you

While the tomorrow of my own soul could 

only have value in your eyes.  I followed.

And you got close enough and deep enough to slide

beneath the creases of fragile longing without a sound

Measuring my heartbeats. I knew that it was too early to assess the damage.
In the darkness I enabled your light
to shine.
In your shadow, I extinguished my own.

About this poem

Written at the end of a love that was never really love.

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Written on October 30, 2022

Submitted by poetiklysence on September 09, 2023

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Scheme A B X X X X X X X X X X X B XXXA
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 762
Words 159
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 4

Carol Covington

Carol Covington is an Army veteran, mother, grandmother and recent college graduate. She earned her B.A. in 2020 from Metropolitan State University of Denver, an IDP titled degree "Healing Trauma through Creative Self-Expression. Currently a guest poet with Art from Ashes, Carol hopes to complete her first poetry collection this year. more…

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