Analysis of My twin and I



When my mom was pregnant with my twin sister and me.Her pregnancy was tragic,you will see.                           
 When my father and mother got married.It was love at first sight.A few months later they got in an argument one night.It was heated, she told him to leave.He died on New Years Eve!     
 A bad car accident he was driving.Our whole life my mother had been hiding.She felt guilt and shame in everyway.She gave up on us everyday.
  When we were born we didn't have a chance on this earth.Wasn't fair we looked like him since birth.                  My mom went through her whole life and never admit.What happened that night, she wanted to quit.She married five times before she died.The pain never subside.                                       
 My twin and I went through hell!That's another story to tell!                                 
 I just want everyone to know there hope!We gotta find ways to cope.To make it on this earth.We always need to find our worth!                         
   Through all this I had to forgive my mother.I loved her like no other!I took care of her unconditional.We were raised traditional.                                      
 I have no regrets at all.I've broke down my wall.Just try everyday not to quit!Even when you feel at your ends wit!


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Characters 1,300
Words 229
Sentences 31
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 109
Words per line (avg) 27
Letters per stanza (avg) 869
Words per stanza (avg) 216

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True story on my Family start in life!

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Written on July 20, 2023

Submitted by Mandylicious on July 22, 2023

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Mandy Brickles

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