Analysis of To You Who I Adore...



Beautiful woman
Messaged me out of the blue.
A new friend is she.

Special she is now.
Her beauty overwhelms me.
Is this destiny?

I will treasure this.
A blessing from up above.
What else could this be?

Our paths meant to cross.
A new friend blessing my life.
I am so lucky.

She a precious gift.
Treasure her and be happy.
Thank you just for you.

Now may you find love.
That I pray to God above,
As I adore you.

- For "A" -


Scheme XAB XBB XCB XXB XBA CCA X
Poetic Form
Metre 10010 111101 01111 10111 010011 11100 11101 0101101 11111 101111 0111011 11110 10101 1000110 11111 11111 1111101 11011 10
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 428
Words 109
Sentences 17
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 1
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 45
Words per stanza (avg) 12

About this poem

This poem was written off the cuff as a poetic gift for a newly found and special friend to me. I wrote this poem with the stanzas being in haiku format. First shot at something like this, but the gift is the message within the poem itself. The new friend shall remain anonymous, and only this person will know that this was intended for them alone. I hope it is one that is enjoyed by all and treasured by the one who it is for. God bless.

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Written on June 08, 2023

Submitted by liltank76 on June 08, 2023

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Dr. Peter G. R. Toves

Dr. Pete Toves is an off the cuff poet, one who writes about his experiences as a therapeutic way to deal with issues in his life. He is an American poet, U.S. Air Force Veteran, and follower of Jesus Christ. He hopes that what he writes will speak to others, inspiring those who too may be dealing with similar issues in their own lives. Writing poetry is a God-given talent, one that we should use to uplift others and help them to heal from their own pains. We are all in this together. more…

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