Analysis of Waiting Is A Heat Wave

Charles Edward York 1966 (Saigon, Vietnam)



Waiting Is A Heat Wave

Waiting is a heat wave
Beating sweat on my eye brows
As I look to the horizon
For something or someone
Not yet here
The anticipation
Weighs heavy as hot humidity
Pressing down
Making me thirsty
For a cool glass of
Refreshing water right now.

I am soaked with let down
When the wait wastes time
The insidious lie
The false hope
The deception that says
Good things come
To those who wait
Delayed justice is
Justice denied
Growing gray hairs
Offers no luxury to urgency.

Driven to overcome
Makes me persist and endure
Focus is a blue sky
Opening my eyes
Showing me purpose
Moving me forward
Time waits for no one
Seizing the moment
I go after what I need
The relevance of now
Inspires me to go for it!

Copyright © 2023 Charles Edward York
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Scheme A Axbbxbcdcxe dxfxxgxxxxc gxfxxxbxxex xx
Poetic Form
Metre 101011 101011 1011111 11110010 11011 111 00010 110110100 101 10110 10111 0101011 111111 10111 001001 011 001011 111 1111 01101 1001 1011 1011001100 10110 1101001 101011 10011 10110 10110 11111 10010 1110111 010011 0111111 101101 111110111101100010101010010111111010100100010110010100101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 986
Words 189
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 11, 11, 11, 2
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 158
Words per stanza (avg) 36

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The agony of waiting

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Written on June 29, 2023

Submitted by charlesedwardyork on June 29, 2023

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Charles Edward York

Charles Edward York is an author and poet activist living in Plano, Texas. He’s written over 1400 poems and published 17 books of poetry. Born in Vietnam and raised a citizen in Dallas, Texas, he writes poems that include the subjects of love and relationships, nature, social justice, including police violence against African-Americans and minorities, astronomy and others. more…

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