Analysis of ME VS YOU

mad hippie poet 1974 (new jersey)



Where are my answers? I do not want to be angry anymore, but this waiting game has pushed me far. I spoke up I spoke out now they are in a rush to shut me up so they slowly plan to take my land and hold a finger against their mouths and say hussssh.

I was always looking for a reason some kind of purpose in these lives that I have lived. I spelt my blood like a river damn I broke many sweats. I hear the hushes does he not know what it is that it is going against are we the ones who have gone mad because we do not sit in silence when like a school libierian they hush to be still and quiet

The finger that the man hushes him with maybe the same that he points at others refusing to take blame because he cares not to tarnish his or the companies name.

You can not hush this man is about to speak for a man who lives by a code can neither be bought or sold the beans are out of the bag the man they will all soon tell stories about is me and now it is me versus you


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Characters 971
Words 212
Sentences 7
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 4
Letters per line (avg) 189
Words per line (avg) 52
Letters per stanza (avg) 189
Words per stanza (avg) 52
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Written on May 25, 2023

Submitted by Oakley on May 25, 2023

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mad hippie poet

I have been writing for 40 years my poetry is about life,death love,and redemption. after having two near death expiercences and a TBI my poetry has become more spirtual more…

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