Analysis of mass of self



each hair dances
upon my arms
wind gently loves my body—
my skin

when wading
while waiting
water waves wildly

it crashes
my island—
flooded

my miniature mass of self
of flesh—
trembling

my earth quakes
along no fault line
the fault is my own—
my glory


Scheme XXAX BBA XXX XXB XXXA
Poetic Form
Metre 1110 0111 1101110 11 110 110 10110 110 110 10 1100111 11 100 111 01111 01111 110
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 274
Words 62
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 3, 3, 4
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 12
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 40
Words per stanza (avg) 9
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Written on January 20, 2002

Submitted by RWHoyt on April 25, 2023

Modified on April 27, 2023

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