Analysis of The Club

Tommy L. Maddox 1972 (North Carolina)



Where to go,
what to do?
My passion is on fire.

Who to dance with?
With whom shall I take the chance?
To cure my desire,
to put out my flame.

I sit here, but no one comes to mind.

Is her hair red, or is it blond?
Maybe black, or maybe brunette.
She is here,
This I know.

What is her name?
For only she can put out this flame.

My passion is on fire,
My desire is a flame.
Who will it be?

Who can put out this burning desire for love?


Scheme axB xxbc x xxxa cc Bcx x
Poetic Form
Metre 111 111 1101110 1111 1111101 111010 11111 111111111 10111111 10111001 111 111 1101 110111111 1101110 1010101 1111 111111001011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 438
Words 117
Sentences 14
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 1, 4, 2, 3, 1
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 45
Words per stanza (avg) 13
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Written on April 22, 2023

Submitted by tmaddox3 on April 22, 2023

Modified on April 22, 2023

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Tommy L. Maddox

Tommy L. Maddox has traveled the world and seen many wonderful and horrible things. Cursed by demons and been blessed by angels. During a time when he was at a loss for what life was to be about his heart opened up and poetry flowed forth. From there came songs and the need to fill himself with more knowledge of the world. A path that has lead to history, theology, religion, philosophy and the discovery that his ancestors were famous musicians from King George of France and the Queen Elizabeth the 1st to the first musician to hold the title of Master of the Kings Music. (Nicholas "The Younger" Lanier.) All the way forward in time to "A Street Car Named Desire." There are many other aspects from which he came from and has created his own path which continues to develop as he moves forward. more…

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