Analysis of You and I

Nondumiso shezi 2009 (Johannesburg)



I've always thought about
You and I against the world
You and I above it all,
But lately you and I seems
More like you and her
I get that sometimes you gotta
Let it go and go with the flow,
But letting you go is like
Letting go of the one thing that
Give meaning to my life.
They say that one-sided loves
Are always the hardest to overcome,
But I can't ever imagine
Me without you,
Me without my reason to live
And me without my other half.
I'll wait even if it means ripping off
A piece of my heart just to put it
Back together when you finally
Realize the what you have pushed away


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKLMNOPQRST
Poetic Form Etheree  (35%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 11101 1010101 1010111 1101011 11100 11101110 11101101 1101111 10110111 110111 1111101 11010110 11110010 1011 10111011 01011101 1110111101 011111111 101011100 100111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 589
Words 130
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 455
Words per stanza (avg) 119

About this poem

This poem is about a heart that has been broken so many times and yet it still believes that he will come back for her.

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Written on February 03, 2023

Submitted by Nondumisoshezi1402 on February 12, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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