Analysis of A battle

Kaleb Hagen 2005 (Toronto)



Mental health is a battle,

similar to war
Sometimes it leaves u curious, wanting to know more  Sometimes it leaves you sad, curled up on the floor and
Sometimes it leaves you in bed; with a lock on your door

Spiraling thoughts enter minds that some may not control
Leaving them empty like a bottomless hole
So get some fresh air , maybe go for a stroll or Consider staying motivated, by setting a goal

Self care isn’t selfish, and neither are you
Because no one but yourself knows what your going through
Everyone makes mistakes, so who cares if you make one too
But remember to stay positive ,
no matter what you do


Scheme X AXA BBB CCCXC
Poetic Form
Metre 1011010 10011 0111110010111011111111010 0111101101111 1001101111101 10110101001 1111110110110101010011001 1111001011 0111101111101 1010111111111 101011100 110111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 630
Words 125
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 1, 3, 3, 5
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 41
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 123
Words per stanza (avg) 29

About this poem

Inspired by my reflections on learning about OCD.

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Written on January 08, 2023

Submitted by KalebH19 on February 03, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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