Analysis of He Suffers. Better to sit and say nothing

Doug Blair 1951 (London)



Last week he lost his Dad.
Great guy Dad was.
Knew something was coming.
Knew he must submit
And move on. Next chapter…
What can I do?
But Friend is grieving.
Testy and questioning
Hard to approach right now.
Do I have words, or some
Similar testimony?
Nah, it would only lacerate.
Come across as judging.
I know what.
In my basement, a borrowed tool.
Needs to be returned.
That will get me inside.
A sitting down, cup of tea, Earl Grey.
Saying little or nothing.
Just being there.


Scheme ABCDEFCCGHIJCKLMNOCP
Poetic Form Etheree  (35%)
Tetractys  (30%)
Metre 111111 1111 110110 11101 011110 1111 11110 100100 110111 111111 100100 1111010 101110 111 0110011 11101 111101 010111111 1010110 1101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 484
Words 105
Sentences 17
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 370
Words per stanza (avg) 89
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Written on February 19, 2023

Submitted by dougb.21370 on February 19, 2023

Modified by dougb.21370 on February 19, 2023

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Doug Blair

Doug was once a lawyer. Frustrated. Went broke 1987. Turned to manufacturing. People talked straight. Worked hard. Listened when appropriate. Lead Hand Shipper and Workplace Safety. Married to Hilary 1974. Two kids Lauren and Jordan. Poet. Photographer. Hiker-photographer. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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