Analysis of The Dunnowhat Bug

Doug Blair 1951 (London)



I don’t know his lifespan

Stretched in the sunshine

Card table top

By the window.

Cottage is ours

For ten days.

Lyn is off teaching for the summer.

I have the same from the store.

Except a meeting next Tuesday

Bug here on the table flies.

Does he have appointments.

A mate? With scant attentions.

Resentments from past rivals?

Children that will

Will he see the sunrise

Or fall to a cold floor.

Long abdomen, six legs.

Shimmering wings, lengthy.

Does his composite eye

See 50 images of me?

Of that salt shaker?

So much done, invented

For the little gaffer

Who has only a couple of days.

To graduate, replicate, fascinate.

And then drop, crinkle and

Turn to the etherial.

His Maker scratching

His head for the next good idea.


Scheme X X X X X A B C D E X X X F E C X D X D B X B A X X F X X
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 1001 1101 1010 10110 111 111101010 1101101 01010110 1110101 111010 0111010 0101110 1011 11101 111011 101011 100110 110101 110011 11110 111010 10101 111001011 11001010 01110 1101 11010 111011010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 807
Words 191
Sentences 22
Stanzas 29
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 20
Words per stanza (avg) 5
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Written on February 13, 2023

Submitted by dougb.21370 on February 13, 2023

Modified by dougb.21370 on February 13, 2023

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Doug Blair

Doug was once a lawyer. Frustrated. Went broke 1987. Turned to manufacturing. People talked straight. Worked hard. Listened when appropriate. Lead Hand Shipper and Workplace Safety. Married to Hilary 1974. Two kids Lauren and Jordan. Poet. Photographer. Hiker-photographer. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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