Analysis of Which End Up? Election? Free Will?

Doug Blair 1951 (London)



Had a dream where

Wesley and Whitefield

Duked it out

Holiness or Reformed

Choosing versus Chosen

Cautious versus Care-free.

They went toe to toe

Blow for blow.

Looked as if Referee

Was Jordan Peterson.

They had been school chums

But Hebrews Letter

And Second Peter took

Them in different directions.

Oh, and there was

Also Wesley’s Method

Visiting, serving the Marginalized.

Whitefield cried out

Works, flesh, futile

Only the Blood

Only the Cross

What more ever possible?

Wesley cried out

Might lose it

Abuse it, repent!

Keep short accounts.

Whitefield just smiled

God chose it, friend.

Never to fail. Elected.

Gave them to His Son.

And through the ages

Tries to lasso the stars.

Brethren following the

Path of their Lord

Word for Word.

In a puzzle that

Will not be solved

Until cosmos dissolves.

Lighten Up…just Love.

Just Serve, hands joined.

Heart over head, every time.


Scheme X X A X B C D D C B X X X X X E X A F E X F A X X X X X E B X X X X X X X X X X X
Poetic Form
Metre 1011 1001 111 100101 101010 101011 11111 111 11101 110100 11111 1110 010101 10100010 1011 10110 100100100 111 1110 1001 1001 1110100 1011 111 01101 1101 111 1111 1011010 11111 01010 111001 101000 1111 111 00101 1111 011001 10111 1111 11011001
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,032
Words 226
Sentences 21
Stanzas 41
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 41
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 17
Words per stanza (avg) 4
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Written on February 11, 2023

Submitted by dougb.21370 on February 11, 2023

Modified by dougb.21370 on February 11, 2023

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Doug Blair

Doug was once a lawyer. Frustrated. Went broke 1987. Turned to manufacturing. People talked straight. Worked hard. Listened when appropriate. Lead Hand Shipper and Workplace Safety. Married to Hilary 1974. Two kids Lauren and Jordan. Poet. Photographer. Hiker-photographer. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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