Analysis of Light in a shadow.



Broken, seems I’m lost again. Heads heavy, eyes down, so hard to look up. Lights warm embrace, I can see the trace of hope. How can this be, His love for me.  Surrendered will, just be still, and breath. I am complete kept close beside at my Saviors  feet. Look up to see his smiling face. I’m safe and loved in this place.


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Poetic Form
Metre 1011101110111111111011110111111111110101111011101110111101111111011101011
Characters 328
Words 63
Sentences 9
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
Lines Amount 1
Letters per line (avg) 242
Words per line (avg) 65
Letters per stanza (avg) 242
Words per stanza (avg) 65

About this poem

Sometimes it’s hard to look up when we feel so down but with our next breath we only need to look up to see his hand was there waiting to lift us up from that dark place.

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Written on January 27, 2023

Submitted by mike1970evans on January 27, 2023

Modified by mike1970evans on April 20, 2023

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