Analysis of Psalm 71 for oldsters, wrinkles and all. No sorry it was Psalm 77.



Things are not as they ought
I am weary
I am vexed by the evil I see
And much pained by those selfish agendas
That would batter
And ridicule me
That would say I am sick
Without rescue
And abandoned by friends of the past
“For this faith ill-befitting
The present
And its precepts that can’t
And won’t last.”
Still I look for your rescue
Dear Father
And your lessons I hold
In my heart
While it seems you partake
Of the wounding
Must all Heavenly comfort depart?
But a check comes
To all of this whining
And a nudge points
To joys of the past
When your power alone
Saved the faithful
From the Pharaoh, the famine
The blast
From the godless and gloating
Around them
And the straightness
Of living at times.
It would seem I have
Preached myself happy
In reviewing your record sublime.


Scheme ABBCDBEFGHIJGFDKLMHLNHOGPQRGHSCTUBV
Poetic Form Tetractys  (40%)
Metre 111111 1110 111101011 0111110010 1110 0101 111111 0110 001011101 1111010 010 01111 011 1111110 110 011011 011 111101 1010 111001001 1011 111110 0011 11101 111001 1010 1010010 01 1010010 011 001 11011 11111 1110 001010101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 789
Words 150
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 35
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 625
Words per stanza (avg) 147
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Submitted by dougb.21370 on January 27, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Doug Blair

Doug was once a lawyer. Frustrated. Went broke 1987. Turned to manufacturing. People talked straight. Worked hard. Listened when appropriate. Lead Hand Shipper and Workplace Safety. Married to Hilary 1974. Two kids Lauren and Jordan. Poet. Photographer. Hiker-photographer. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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