Analysis of THE OBLIVIOUS;MOON



She guides the dead with light
through to the afterlife
in silk and milk she is draped.
like diamonds in flame, she is made

Shy, pleasant and solitary she is
fire and lamp never rendered her obsolete, please
eye of the night she has become
Hello darkness, I'm not ready to succumb

The moon in my mind
is burnt in effigy. I am blind
bald and wild she is
bending on me in particular like sins

but the moon sees nothing of this
the light of her mind is blue-blue and bliss


Scheme XXXX AXBB CCAX DD
Poetic Form
Metre 110111 11010 0101111 11001111 110010011 100110100101 11011101 01101110101 01011 110100111 10111 10110010011 10111011 0110111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 474
Words 98
Sentences 3
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 93
Words per stanza (avg) 23

About this poem

This poem denotes how unlovely we see the moon from here, and how she doesn't care about it. She thinks she is beautiful and she is happy about it. She inspires us to succumb. would we? She is trying to tell us to keep doing what we do, not minding whatever people say or think about us. You are beautiful in your own way, you don't need anybody to tell you that.

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Written on August 16, 2022

Submitted by justtclinton on August 16, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Felix Clinton

Medical laboratory scientist. Nurse. Accidental archeologist. Some of these things may not be true about me, my name is Felix clinton. What is true about me is that I am a songwriter, poet of many soul piercing poems and a fashion model. Born and raised in Nigeria. And also an aspiring author to my forthcoming crime thriller book "UNDER DURESS". more…

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