Analysis of A Homeless Woman
Traffic lights taunt,
flick red, shouting
FORWARD MOTION
IS A PROGRESSIVE IDEA
THAT WILL NOT BE TOLERATED.
Cars surge and bellow, trumpets
blown in on the wind of a
thousand competing directions.
Thirty minutes out, heat shimmers
an asphalt mirage and the city
thunders and wails like an unfed baby.
A borrowed engine lurches and coughs
to its cowardly mid-intersection death and
the green light metal stampede minnows
past in singleminded punctual intent.
Sweat beads become mercenary rivulets.
Pointed toes of welfare heels
protest a four mile pothole sprint,
the image of two children afraid to hope
held tightly in two pumping fists.
The interview waits impatiently
tapping its contemptuous foot.
Scheme | ABCDEFDGHIIJKLMFNOPQIR |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1011 1110 1010 10010010 1111100 1101010 1010110 10010010 10101110 11010010 100111110 01101001 11100101010 011100110 10110001 11011001 101111 101111 01011100111 11001101 01010100 10101001 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 700 |
Words | 119 |
Sentences | 7 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 22 |
Lines Amount | 22 |
Letters per line (avg) | 26 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 577 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 111 |
About this poem
Poetry prompt was one word: anxiety. This is what came out when I thought about it.
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Submitted on June 15, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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