Analysis of A Homeless Woman



Traffic lights taunt,
flick red, shouting
FORWARD MOTION
IS A PROGRESSIVE IDEA
THAT WILL NOT BE TOLERATED.
Cars surge and bellow, trumpets
blown in on the wind of a
thousand competing directions.
Thirty minutes out, heat shimmers
an asphalt mirage and the city
thunders and wails like an unfed baby.
A borrowed engine lurches and coughs
to its cowardly mid-intersection death and
the green light metal stampede minnows
past in singleminded punctual intent.
Sweat beads become mercenary rivulets.
Pointed toes of welfare heels
protest a four mile pothole sprint,
the image of two children afraid to hope
held tightly in two pumping fists.
The interview waits impatiently
tapping its contemptuous foot.


Scheme ABCDEFDGHIIJKLMFNOPQIR
Poetic Form
Metre 1011 1110 1010 10010010 1111100 1101010 1010110 10010010 10101110 11010010 100111110 01101001 11100101010 011100110 10110001 11011001 101111 101111 01011100111 11001101 01010100 10101001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 700
Words 119
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 22
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 577
Words per stanza (avg) 111

About this poem

Poetry prompt was one word: anxiety. This is what came out when I thought about it.

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Submitted on June 15, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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